I was hooked on every line, and I didn't even realize where I was going until I reached the end and felt a really strange disappointment, like I was looking for something and getting increasingly more frantic until I remembered that I hadn't lost anything at all. (Sorry for the long metaphor, haha) I love that I was so emotionally into it, though! This is certainly going in my favorites!
This was wonderfully intense and ambiguous and mysterious in the most intriguing ways, I'll openly admit I got quite lost <XD. It's like one of those things I don't understand, this poem, but I like it nonetheless, it has charm and impact and keeps me thinking about it even after it's over.
The end was like running along a path and then suddenly realizing it leads off up to the edge of a cliff and skidding to a halt at the last second . . . and yet it somehow works. ^^ Amazing job