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Daily Deviation

Given 2013-08-26
If, Then by ~CailinLiath ( Suggested by tiganusi and Featured by Beccalicious )
Ghalaghor Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
this is so deep that i do not know what i should say...except gwasemic (great, awesome and epic mashed together to one single word).
MermaidInDisguise Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I was hooked on every line, and I didn't even realize where I was going until I reached the end and felt a really strange disappointment, like I was looking for something and getting increasingly more frantic until I remembered that I hadn't lost anything at all. (Sorry for the long metaphor, haha) I love that I was so emotionally into it, though! This is certainly going in my favorites!
AkiIsAwesome42 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This was wonderfully intense and ambiguous and mysterious in the most intriguing ways, I'll openly admit I got quite lost <XD. It's like one of those things I don't understand, this poem, but I like it nonetheless, it has charm and impact and keeps me thinking about it even after it's over.

The end was like running along a path and then suddenly realizing it leads off up to the edge of a cliff and skidding to a halt at the last second . . . and yet it somehow works. ^^ Amazing job
kfurnacespoken Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice. I really like this you are phenomenal. When I figure out how to post my poetry I hope you will read.
sibiawesome Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013
I feel like there should be a hunched, old woman reading this to me... It has a very mysterious tone. :) I liked it a lot, good work.
Wataqo Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013   Writer
That last line made me want to kick something, but in a good way I think.
RhynWilliams Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013   Traditional Artist
lovely well done on the dd
ShadowedAcolyte Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013
Congrats. I like how pregnant this is, each new "If" swelling with implications and insinuations.
beeinthebottle Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013   Writer
Wow. (Isn't that an articulate comment on my part?) This is really, really nice. Congrats on the DD.
KyaniteArcher Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the Daily Deviation. :la:
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